Although we teachers (especially upper elementary, middle and high school) assume we're ignored much of the time, we are, according to Kohl, "listened to more than they {we} usually think they {we} are" even though we are not always "obeyed" for he extends the thought by explaining that "listening, understanding, and obeying are three different things altogether." Thank you, Herb Kohl. I couldn't agree more! And, with that expression I place myself in the unenviable category with Ronald Reagan who was criticized for employing casual speech. I digress. First of all, I thoroughly enjoyed Herbert Kohl's chapter because I personally adhere to many of the same beliefs, not the least of which is that what I say is often less significant than HOW I say it. I've learned that through the "school of hard knocks" and I don't just mean within my teaching profession. I've learned to step back and LISTEN and most of my listening, interestingly, is to myself rather than to my students. I've learned that I need to listen to how I sound to my friends,my family, my students and the parents of my students (even to my administrators). Kohl really "hit the nail on the head" with his discussion of the difficulties of finding that fine line of commanding trust and respect. It certainly differs from school to school and from student population to student population. Just as I had to find a way to be the adult, the parent, with my own child, I also have to find a way to be the adult, the teacher, with my young students. There must be love, respect and a certain healthy "distance" or lack of familiarity. Perhaps my favorite part of Kohl's chapter dealt with claiming the right to stand up for my students' best interests even when it requires the "fine art of defying ignorant authority." I could identify with his dilemma over whether to give his female students credit for their "incorrect" answers on a standardized test. I appauld him for his wise and reaffiming choice. Because I teach in an equity plus Title I school (which is also in year one of "improvement"), I (along with entire faculty) am constantly being observed, critiqued and hounded to teach according to specific and very narrow test-driven standards. My school (and the administration which directs us) is a perfect and sad example of Kohl's statement that we will ultimately fail because of our "obsession with standards."
Another sad example of the rigidity of the NC standardized testing system was brought to my attention just this week. As I read chapter 10, the discussion on page 170 regarding correlations between the frequency of Black English used in essays and the lower scores, I was angered because it reminded me of the scores that my black students received from the NC 4th grade writing test. My only student to pass, with a 3, was my only white student. That student hails from the same neighborhood of poverty but she probably employs language at home that is closer to standard English than what my black students employ at home. One of my brightest black students, a girl who can read 8th grade level, not only did not pass the test but she scored a one. Even though this student employs BE and qualifies for speech services (due to a lisp), she is incredibly bright and creative. I know that her content was probably far superior to the content of the passing essay but her conventions were unacceptable. Yes, this student does need to learn to employ standard English in order to succeed in the big world but was her language so distracting that the scorer could totally discount the content of her writing? I am incensed because I truly believe that happened. Geneva Smitherman is correct in saying that my students must acquire a working knowledge of standard English but I fear that our system continues to repudiate the identities of many of our students. She echoes the thoughts of Friedman in THE WORLD IS FLAT when she reminds us that America and Americans must wake up to the narrow belief that we can ignore other cultures and other languages.
The thought that English is THE standard is certainly no way to "win friends and influence enemies." In Joan Wynne's chapter, she points out the dangers of encouraging an intolerant view of English as superior to other languages. How ludicrous that would sound to those whose cultures and languages predate ours. I appreciate being reminded that propagating the belief that English is and always will be the standard limits our white students by encouraging a myopic and mistaken view of their own importance. Again I am reminded of THE WORLD IS FLAT by Friedman. He reminds us that we can not afford to become complacent; the world is ever changing and in order to remain viable, Americans must awake to new possibilities and new understandings of others (their cultures and their languages). One of the obvious places to begin to instill a respect for the diversity of the human race is within the classroom. That's pretty intimidating, isn't it, but I read what many of my fellow teacher-students have written and I am encouraged for the actions must begin on a personal level, that level between teacher and student, student and student.
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Betsy,
Thank you for critiquing the writing test -- one thing that I believe is that writing scores reflect more about the scorer than the student. I read an article written by a scorer, and she said that she got no training and that sometimes, when she became tired, she read only the first paragraph and gave a score based on her first impression. It is incredibly disconcerting how much POWER these scorers have, how little training they receive, how little they know about language and writing, and how their own biases are evident in their scoring practices.
I'd like to see the actual teachers of the students score these tests. Of course, they'd be accusations of subjective scoring, but it seems that there is no such thing as objective scoring!!!
I agree with you that I am encouraged by the conversations engendered on this Blog in that there will be some advocacy in the classrooms of those who are in this course. :)
Alecia
Posted by Prof. Alecia Jackson | June 2, 2007 12:01 PM
Posted on June 2, 2007 12:01
Hi Betsy,
I just wanted to let you know that you are not alone when it comes to the writing test issue. When I looked back over my scores this week, I too took a special look at the conventions scores received by my African-American students. Just like you, all of my African-American students bombed the conventions part of the writing test. Out of 5 African-American children (including one who is AIG), not one received more than 1 point on conventions. All of the children scored fairly well on the content because of their creative imaginations; however, due to conventions only 1 actually passed. This also happened to many of my white students because of their “southern dialect.” Should our students be punished for the way they were raised and where they were born? I do realize that students should have a grip on SE but shouldn’t their sense of story be just as important?
Kelly Mabe
Posted by Kelly Mabe | June 2, 2007 8:57 PM
Posted on June 2, 2007 20:57
Betsy,
I have taught fourth grade in the past, for four years in fact. Your comments on the writing test brought back those memories for me (although let me assure you, I teach the writing process in a very basic form to my Kindergarten students just learning to write!). The NC Writing Test is not a valid tool to assess student knowledge of the writing PROCESS. When we teach about writing, we stress originality, creativity and the entire process; yet within a brief period on the day of the tests students are expected to create a perfect piece with little prep time and zero feedback. The story is then scored based on rigid standardized methods with generally leave the teachers, students, and parents frustrated wondering what in the world to do? Like you, I couldn't help but believe that some of my students were scored unfairly because of their mechanics or the possibility of their ethnicity or cultural background coming through in the story. Geez, isn't that what real authors do-- they write from the heart? Not to mention, they have professional editors to help with grammar and mechanics. Who is on the side of our student authors if we aren't??
Posted by Renee Pagoota | June 3, 2007 8:36 PM
Posted on June 3, 2007 20:36
Betsy,
I agree with you when you stated that, "one of the obvious places to begin to instill a respect for the diversity of the human race is within the classroom". This is so true. This is where teaching and educating the students of accepting each other as individuals and to not be judgmental. Our little ones, do not know the difference, regardless of what they hear at home. All they know is that as a teacher, you love them, accept them, and help them. This is all they see, hear, and know.
Posted by Shirley Mathis | June 4, 2007 8:18 PM
Posted on June 4, 2007 20:18